Okay so this is going to be a short review. I tried to start this text with an open mind. However if a mystery can't fire your brain in the next 10 or so pages it is done. And this little book is done. I love the idea behind this. But a second book should have it's world truly established.
Once the world is built, move the story along. I can tell the writer was in TV writing because the feeling of the dialogue was an attempt to be a sitcom with a mystery component. Not a mystery first.
The Book in Question
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